I apply for the job ^^ Correct my sheets, please?

(if i apply for a sales assistant at Virgin megastore )

EDUCATION:
Please tell us about any qualifications or awards you possess that you that you think are relevant to the role.
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I've studied electronic engineering at University of Ulsan in South Korea. I'm a final year student. but Now I'm taking a year off to study British culture and English.

PREVIOUS EMPLOYMENT:
Current Job/Situation-Reason for leaving.
(We're not looking for a list of to and from dates, more an overview of what you're currently doing and how long you've been doing it)
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I had worked at TESCO for six months(JULY 2005~DEC 2005)
At that time, I belonged to Customer service center. So I Particularly arranged the property and helped customers parking.

Previous Job/Situation-Reason for leaving.
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At the end of 2005, I planned to travel around China with my friends. So I quitted the job.

Hi, this looks ok, just a few basic grammar mistakes. Try something like this: (wasn't sure what you meant by "arranged the property" - I am assuming you meant you kept the area free of litter, or were stocking shelves?)

I have studied electronic engineering at the University of Ulsan in South Korea. I am a final year student, however I am taking a year off to study British culture and English.

I worked for Tesco for six months (July 2005 -Dec 2005)
I was employed at the Customer Service Centre. My duties involved assisting customers in the car park and keeping the area tidy.

I left the job as I planned to travel in China with friends. I am now seeking employment for the duration of my gap year.

You studied electronic engineering at University of Ulsan in South Korea and now u wanna be i till girl for virgin?

Good to see these student grants aren't wasted
looks ok to me, but be honest with them about only looking for temp work.
I don't get the 'Particularly arranged the property' bit. And I would also not say 'So I quitted the job' For starters its bad grammer but the best thing to say is that you handed in your notice, or terminated your employment.
Never use the words quit. Gives a bad impression to your potentially new employer!!
Good luck with the application
GOOD LUCK!!!
EDUCATION:
Please tell us about any qualifications or awards you possess that you that you think are relevant to the role.
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I studied Electronic Engineering at University of Ulsan in South Korea. I'm a final year student but now I'm taking a year off to study English and British culture.

PREVIOUS EMPLOYMENT:
Current Job/Situation-Reason for leaving.
(We're not looking for a list of to and from dates, more an overview of what you're currently doing and how long you've been doing it)
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I worked at TESCO for six months(JULY 2005~DEC 2005)
At that time, I belonged to Customer service center. It was ther that I helped to organise the store and deal with customer's parking issues.

Previous Job/Situation-Reason for leaving.
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At the end of 2005, I decided to travel around China with my friends so unfortunately had to leave.

Now just copy and paste! Not this bit obviously!