I'll give 10 points if u explain to me the mistakes in here?

I've always wanted to be a music star, have a band and travel around the world with my guitar. Earn money doing the thing I love: playing my guitar and doing a lot of songs, increasing my skills and abilities in the instrument. I鈥檇 love meeting other musicians (famous stars) so we could write music together.

I've always wanted to teach music theory, too. I think is an easy job and you earn a lot of money doing it. Of course not in this country because here there aren't any well paid jobs...I mean countries like Brazil and USA have more music schools and a greater appreciation for the music.

Other reason that I have is the time: I hate the ordinary work time. I wish I could do whatever I want during the mornings and later at night start to work. By doing this, I would be the happiest man on the world.

Other important reason is the possibilities that I would have like travelling around the world, knowing a lot of places, meeting all the music stars, and playing songs for fans.

Sometimes I feel sad because here there aren't many possibilities to find a job playing an instrument. The fact is that I'm going to do the best I can -always- My skills and knowledge will help me to have all I want.

I have corrected what I noticed wrong.

I've always wanted to be a music star and have a band while traveling around the world with my guitar. I would like to earn money doing the thing I love: playing my guitar and singing a lot of songs. I would also be interested in increasing my skills and abilities playing the guitar. I鈥檇 love meeting other musicians (famous stars) so we could write music together.

I've always wanted to teach music theory, as well. I think it's an easy job and you earn a lot of money doing it. Of course, not in this country because here there are not any well-paid jobs. Countries like Brazil and USA have more music schools and a greater appreciation for the music.

Other reason that I am interested is because of the free-time that I have. I hate the ordinary work time. I wish I could do whatever I want during the mornings and then just start my work later on in the night. By doing this, I would be the happiest man in the world.

Other important reason is the possibilities that I would have. I would be able to travel across the world getting to know new places. I would also be able to meet all of the music stars that are around the world today.

Sometimes I feel sad because here there aren't many possibilities to find a job playing an instrument. The fact is that I'm going to do the best I can. Always. My skills and knowledge will help me have everything that I want.

What exactly do you want here?

is this a proof read question?

You're a man?